Fantazia- with the background

The story so far:
She, a very beautiful young elfen girl, is not allowed outside her home boundries by her overprotective grandfather. This is her pleading with him, and how can he say no to such innocence? He looks at her and thinks she is a splitting image of her now dead mother and does not want to let her go for fear that her good looks will encourage evil in young men.

This is the 2nd time that i have ever drawn a male and the first time that i've drawn an old male.
What do you think?